"How I am feeling" Stories

We have been trying to write our ideas clearly to show what we think and feel. Here are some wonderful stories with details to explain what the writer was meaning.

On the weekend my brother jammed my finger in the door.
I felt sad. Mum gave me an ice in a cloth but it didn't work.
By Novah

I went to Splash Planet in my car and it was my birthday
and Novah came as well and it was fun. I liked it.
By Harper

I went in my car. We went somewhere dumb. We went to Australia.
I felt angry as I wanted to go to my Nana's house. We had to go in
three planes to get there.
By Harvey

My tooth came out when I was playing in the playground.
Mrs Smith gave me a certificate with my tooth. My Dad said
when my tooth came out he was going to give me five bucks
( and the tooth fairy ) and I am going to be happy.
By Angel

I went to the beach and it was the Haumoana beach. I felt amazed
when I was there and my Mum took me.
By Briarne

Last night I felt worried because I didn't know what would happen
to Sparrow over night. The vet gave Sparrow an injection.
By Liam